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~If I was your girl….friend I would let you touch everything that I am~

At least that's what he read about (name).
France looked at the (h/c) girl walking in the (color that looks good on you) dress walking down the street. Her (h/l) hair blowing softly along with her dress, he looked at her freshly shaven (skin toned) legs and chuckled. He had to have her. So he walked up to her inerupting her happy stroll.

"Bonjour madame." He purred in a thick French accent. The girl smiled.

"Bonjour." She responded politely to the best of her ability.  He grabbed her hand and kissed it softly making her blush.

"May I say that (color that looks good on you) dress makes you look more ravishing than you already are." The woman couldn't respond. She was too flustered. This man just coming up and giving her compliments like that? She never experienced this before.

"Uh….uh…." Come on say something (name!) she scolded herself. "Thank you." She blushed finally finding the right words. He just chuckled and smiled.

"Someone as beautiful as you has no need to be shy mon amie." He interlocked his fingers with hers and looked her in the eye. "It would be my pleasure if I could take you out tonight, may I mon cher?"  All (name) could do was nod like an idiot.


~After dinner at his place (Going into 2nd POV now)~

"W-Wow. That was….just….wow…" you said breathless. He smiled and kissed your head

"Anything for you mon amour."

"But that was amazing!!!" you finally said getting your courage up. He chuckled.

"I'm glad you liked it. Maybe I can cook for you again?" (AN: HONHON You thought I was talking about sex huh? XD) You nodded.

"Please." You loved his cooking. Everything was so flavorful and so rich. The chicken was so tender it fell off the bone and it was so juicy. The sauce he placed ontop of it was amazing, so sweet yet it had an irresistible tang to it at the end. The wine he served was amazing and ….just everything was perfect. The scenery was so romantic as the candles shined everywhere spreading light to the room where you two sat across from each other enjoying the food and company. He was a really sweet person, he smiled listening to your every word as you talked about yourself a little. After having your fifth cup of wine you looked at the clock.

"Oh I should go." You said. His smile faded and his eyes almost seemed like they were begging you not to go.

"Do you really have to?" he asked as if he was a small child. You looked into his sad eyes and almost felt your heart breaking. You really didn't want to leave him, not just yet. He got up and kissed your shoulder softly. "I don't want you to go." Nuzzling your neck, he breathed softly and held you close. "Do you feel that mon cher?"

"Feel what Francis?"

"My 'eart beating like this when I'm with you." He answered. "If you really 'ave to go then promise me we'll do this again." He whispered against your neck. You shivered and nodded.

"O-Of course Francis." He smiled and kissed you softly holding your waist watching your eyes flutter closed and kiss him back holding his arms. When he broke the kiss, your eyes were still half closed from being so dazed. "Maybe…I don't have to leave yet."



~I can feel your body over mine, as you run your fingertips right across my spine~


You purred softly as he stroked your back softly his fingertips doing magic on your body as he swiftly undressed you. He smiled and kissed you again while placing a firm hand on her breast.

"F-Francis~" you moaned. He chuckled and groped softly searching for that spot that made you feel the best. His tongue slowly glided from your neck to your waist as you writhed and gasped as he removed your panties with his teeth. "Francis…what—ah~ Francis~!!" you moaned loudly As you shot up….in your bed. "What?" you asked holding your head. The sun was up and you were in your sheets, in your house. "How did I get—right. Francis walked me home later." You said to yourself. So that was just a dream? You asked yourself. You chuckled. Some dream. You removed the covers and felt the cool air hit your legs. You were wet, you were craving him.

"I need a shower." You said to yourself. Sighing you stripped and got a towel and went into the bathroom. Turning on the water you began to relax as your muscles unclenched as you cleaned yourself. Your body shivered as you touched your neck and your thighs. Your breath was hot. Your breath was hot for him. You wanted him. You needed him.  
"Francis…" you moaned. This was ridiculous. You've only met him yesterday, but you already wanted him so bad. There was just something about him that you needed. He was beautiful, he was charming and so polite and sexy. You unconsciously made the water pressure harder on the shower head as you took it and sweeped off the soap your body with the water. The way the water beat on your skin made you feel amazing as your head moved when the water beat on the muscles of your neck.

"Francis…" you called again knowing well enough he couldn't hear you.

~I could drive you crazy~

You couldn't take it anymore. You had to have him. You just had too. This was too much. Getting out the shower still naked you dried yourself enough to grab your phone as you called him.

"Bonjour?" he answered over the phone.

"Francis.." you smiled softly. He chuckled in your ear softly.

"Ah, Mon cher. 'ow nice. What is it mon amie?"

"I need you." You said blushing. There was a long pause?

"Pardon? I don't--"

"I need you Francis." You sighed. "I keep thinking about you. Your hands, you breath your voice. I just need you." He chuckled.

"(name), I'll be right over."  Eagerly you waited not even remembering that you were naked. When he arrived, you opened the door not hesitating to kiss him. He held you close and kissed back stroking your hair.

"You're so wet mon cher!" he laughed.

"I love you!" you said quickly. "You drive me insane. The way you talk, the way you laugh, the way you smile and kiss me and just--" he interrupted your confusion with a kiss and smiled.

"Mon Cher. Je t'iame."
This is off the song girlfriend by Ashanti [link]
I love this song. I just feel I need more France stories
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Fun fact: I am learning french at the moment...and I love speaking french in my friends ear. Just nonsense works.

Me: *leans up and mumbles some french* Je'taime
Him: God youre such a weirdo XD
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Eirya Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
Aw it's so perfect ; w ;
It's a little strange for me to find some french words in a english text... because I'm french xD ( that's why my english is soooo bad <<)
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Thanks for this story ~ 
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015
Oh, merci beaucoup~ ^^
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hetaliafangirl01 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HELLZ YEA~
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
You like? ^^
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:iconhetagirl63:
Hetagirl63 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
That was a beautifully placed authors note in the beginning! Brilliant!
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:iconmissxcocoa:
MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Why thank you~
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:iconhetagirl63:
Hetagirl63 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Np loved btw
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SilverTheMystica Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That.......escalated......
HONHONHONHON HONHONHONHON!!!
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
HONHONHONHONHONFrance (Crying) [V3] !!! 
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ashwing144 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
((((an: HONHON you thought i was talking about sex huh?) you nodded.    ))))
whats wrong wit this line huh?
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
Yeah, it was perfect wasn't it?
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:iconashwing144:
ashwing144 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
i guess
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:iconmissxcocoa:
MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
You guess?
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ashwing144 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
yaeh 
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fangirlingiscooler Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
(AN: HONHON You thought I was talking about sex huh? XD)
ALL RIGHT YOU CAUGHT ME YOU ASS! XD
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
XD Tee hee~ Dirty birdie.
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fangirlingiscooler Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*chuckles and smiles darkly* Russia (Curse) [V2] dont judge me mon ami . Ohonhonhon~France and England (Abduct...) [V1] 
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Oh my O.O
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fangirlingiscooler Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Prussia (Arrives to explain) [V3] France (Denies) [V1] Spain (Happy Cashier) [V3] Bad Touch Trio Icon  France is my baby x( AND the other two too x)
Did you write any Bad Touch Trio Fanfics? I would LOVE to read them! :D
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
I have not yet....I'm working on KevEdd and Supernatural right now
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pacificislandlove23 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student Writer
(AN: HONHON You thought I was talking about sex huh? XD) You nodded. 

I nodded. onion head &quot;shame&quot; 
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
:lmao: I'm dying XD
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pacificislandlove23 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student Writer
I died too :P
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:iconmissxcocoa:
MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
:3
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Zazzyleey Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
was.... DID I MISS SOMETHING??  was i naked when he cam or wha whaat?!?
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:iconmissxcocoa:
MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
Yeah you didnt even dry off ;)
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:iconzazzyleey:
Zazzyleey Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
GAH -///- i can hear him ''ahonhonhon''ing... MEEEP xC
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
XD
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Zazzyleey Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
hes lucky hes my fav caracter -//_//-
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
WHOO :iconfrancesparkleplz: :iconhonhonhonplz: I shall count myself very lucky mon cher.
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Zazzyleey Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*hugs france* -///- stop being so damn hot i can't keep myself away from you x3
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
France: *hugs back* honhonhon~ I shall embrace you mon cher~
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cosettevin Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Professional Writer
Me: -reads dream part- :iconfaceplantplz:
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
XDDD
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:iconcosettevin:
cosettevin Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
Gotta love them Frenchies! ❤
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:iconmissxcocoa:
MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
hell yeah
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
My ovaries just exploded thank a lot Francis 
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:iconmissxcocoa:
MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
He said Il n'y a ne pas. (You;re welcome)
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
no YOUR WELCOME
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
^^
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Your a great Writer
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Thank you...:happycry:
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:iconotakugirl14:
OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
It was a cute story
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Thank you  :smooch:
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diamondcatlenny Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
This is sweet. But there's a slight problem with the French. "mon ami" is masculine. It needs an 'e' "mon amie" not to be rude or anything, though, sorry, and this is wonderfully written.
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
No no its fine. I made this before i started learning french. SO i didnt know at the time. I've never caught it though. So thanks! :giggle: and i'm glad you liked it
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diamondcatlenny Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Okay. I always feel really bad correcting people and stuff, but gender in French is one of my little pet peves. And it's no problem, really. And thanks for writing an enjoyable story! (and putting French in it. I prefer reading in French to English most of the time.)
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Some people do take it horribly XD Thank you for liking it
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Anonymous-Lizard Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's France's ability. >8D
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
oui. ♥ :love:
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